Once upon a time there were a lot of people at the beach. There were people that liked to sleep in the sun and there were also people that were walking on the beach.
The beach is good for swimming, is it very warm and is good because the kids can go swimming. People can play in the water. Some people come with their umbrellas to protect their skin because the beach is too hot.
The beach is big and there is a little shade for the lifeguard on the side. The people liked to sleep under the umbrellas and some people come with their lunch and eat. Some people like to go, swim to cool down, get some fresh air, come back, eat lunch and then sleep again.
The kids like running around the beach. After swimming they come and eat and drink and then they go back and play.
There are two girls running to go swimming, the girls are happy because its fun. One of the girls went to her mum to eat and drink, after she finished eating her lunch she went back to play.
There was a girl, her sister and they were fighting because the boy was playing with the with her sister and they go to the beach and the another sister was angry becsuse her sister was going with the boy and the another sister was call him to go with him and play.
You have a good setting Faleaka, but you need to remember that there needs to be a problem and solution too.
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