I am a Year 8 at St Pius X Catholic School in Auckland. I am in Room 7 and my Teacher is Mrs Tui.
Hi Faleaka what a nice story about a girl that was a very busy girl. What I like about your story is when Emily was sitting on the beach ball and then after that she went and swam int he water. Maybe next time you could more longer sentences.
Faleaka I like your story about how you said about when she didn't like the rain and about what she did like about the ants on her arm.
Hi Faleaka what a nice story about a girl that was a very busy girl. What I like about your story is when Emily was sitting on the beach ball and then after that she went and swam int he water. Maybe next time you could more longer sentences.
ReplyDeleteFaleaka I like your story about how you said about when she didn't like the rain and about what she did like about the ants on her arm.
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